【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
9 @; @+ [* l3 v% ?9 x. a! z" E' HThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
+ v6 P2 G4 D0 c; z" xThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
/ }5 f3 W: Z2 wI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
" W/ R, h, K4 X% T9 O' rBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
( W( }) }8 M( L! \" \) r8 HIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
0 M0 d0 B2 Y& W" ^; R) xI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
5 F) {- S) b. p+ u. S+ UWhy is it so difficult to express?
. M; `9 Z5 F# `$ `: eI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
: f) ]5 T* I  v) |: vOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- X0 [) t/ C9 j0 Y/ AIf today isn’t too late,
) b; p! S5 [; }, MI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
4 ~; q4 I! C/ A8 R% eCan I entrust it to you?
3 T, C; K$ V# ^: s) U% c6 jEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
3 a. d! w# ~* {One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
/ x+ G5 E, ^. }( e* P0 gI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
" _( @( H2 G7 PI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
8 Z2 s+ h; K  G- C$ eEntrust my love within your heart
% r2 {+ @$ m1 E9 g. KCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

  }+ F* ?5 \$ M  B) ^/ Q& k' i: E[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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+ X$ O5 `( {$ F  q' _+ q<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
+ v" y" _6 G$ e& x<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
6 i; p6 Z/ B: Z) O<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
$ k4 q! R* A$ A<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
" o1 `- P& x( M- V<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
! b- t9 I$ R# B  g! q, u- t<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
# p& e  t: W' i  g<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
0 ?) m) Z$ o) {<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
% _$ n3 ]  x2 [* V<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
. L+ P3 O- d# e. h8 }<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
5 r' h% q: T2 |<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
" p# ?8 m. A0 k5 p1 U. K<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
, J( O. Y" O. {( `+ f/ i<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
5 A; \2 K' p( }) w3 s) r' L<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
! c% E  R3 J6 @' S+ B<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
2 F. W( w- c- \5 {7 h$ c<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- @+ E9 v/ ^- C0 Y2 u* t3 \<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' @& }4 {$ `$ U: z+ X<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
9 C& S! q: N4 o9 ?& p<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
8 _# _( x3 V3 T: l) f2 h% u<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
8 E& @- @- n; N6 a$ N<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
0 ~) c) K6 }! T5 |% a; N% n0 W5 F<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
. u# v% s* }: _6 a8 N<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
! N/ D/ I/ F! V. m<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
  }! s* W2 S+ }6 z7 L0 r$ \<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
" V7 o  S4 h" d" B7 p2 c$ |- \* T<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
. w8 Z2 A6 w5 ?2 o: y4 x4 ~, B! M, l<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
. G9 ^+ o2 \0 |: r6 F8 T! ?<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
" l% \2 {5 a7 G- a0 k  F<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
, E8 ^" [% z2 f<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
9 h, K1 @3 s5 X" S<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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( R5 r( _+ }2 |, h# R" `( a7 B<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>